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Write a short text which summarises the feedback you received from your tutor and peers including your response to that feedback. Was it helpful? Did you agree? Disagree? Is there anything you would like to change about what you presented based on the feedback you received?

At first, I was going to do the phrase”No ball games”. In the offline group discussion, all of my group members think it is the most interesting project. However, after I drawing the sketch of three ideas and showing to my friend to got some feedback, they said they cannot understand the project of “No ball games”. So I chose to give up doing this project. Because of the good feedback of the work ”Buy one get one free”, I chose doing this phrase. I was trying to make a poster, like a sale poster in the supermarket. But I found that it is not good to look and more look likes a collection of all the things, I change another way to think of this elements and making a better looking poster. My phrase at first just as same as the phrase that written on the padlet, but my classmate Lucy said, maybe it is better to use”Buy one mask, get health free”. I think it is a good suggestion, so I tried it, I found it can express my idea more directly. And my tutor asked me to change a way, like more focus on mask to do the project. I think it is a good idea, because working on the mask is more related to my topic. Then, she showed me a poster, it is a woman on the center of the picture, and she is wearing a mask. It inspired me a lot. I think maybe writing my phrase on the mask is also a good way to communicate my idea. In the end, the outcome is a picture that I wear a mask, there are some words on the mask:” Get one mask, get health free”. And I use two green lines to hide my eyes. Because I think The character in the picture can be anybody, everyone now should wear masks to stop the spreading of the Covid-19. Also, green for me is a symbol color of health. Hope everyone can be healthy.

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